I like the use of language in this. It brings the land in the setting to life, as well as Miss Becka's point of view. Good character development in that I can see from this excerpt that Miss Becka knows the land and the river like they were a part of her own body. I want to read more.
Love it!
I heard him read this excerpt on the County Highway summer tour
I like the use of language in this. It brings the land in the setting to life, as well as Miss Becka's point of view. Good character development in that I can see from this excerpt that Miss Becka knows the land and the river like they were a part of her own body. I want to read more.