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Michael Goodwin Hilton's avatar

A worthy stab at 21st century stream-of-consciousness. Joyce, Woolf echo throughout, and might just approve.

Philip Traylen's avatar

Cheers Michael!

Rowland Scherman's avatar

The opening photograph is not nearly interesting enough to make a reader slog through so much verbiage.

Philip Traylen's avatar

The application of the category of the interesting to the sphere of aesthetics is intellectual suicide.

David Snider's avatar

Love the one-sentence story. “…the way out is also the way in…” I take that to mean only by embracing death can you live fully—hence the title—but we fight it, become zombies, and miss so much along the route. “…the comic timing of death…” is also lovely. Thanks for a fun—and possibly enlightening—read!