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Robert Qua's avatar

I am the oldest of three boys. Ya kinda nailed it. My old English teacher woulda let you skip class for the rest of the semester with a story like that.

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Page Huyette's avatar

Fantastic story, I loved the quiet energy.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Fun ride. Nuanced emotions. Enjoyed it.

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Tom Pendergast's avatar

Yup, that was really good: subtle and well-modulated, you didn’t go for the big zinger (which you might’ve).

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Khải Đơn's avatar

I love this story, the awkward sentiment between the two spins out quietly and somehow hurts to read. Thank you.

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Annie Smith's avatar

Gosh I loved this. Thank you!

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