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Cara Rappaport's avatar

this was amazing. couldn't stop reading.

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Chris's avatar

Reading this made me annoyed on behalf of the protag. Super condescending character, well-written

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Tim's avatar

I loved the tone. Very catcher rye esque

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TL's avatar

water finally got through the stone ⏳️

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Michael Goodwin Hilton's avatar

Great story. Sparse, controlled, vivid, unsuspectingly melancholy.

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