Thanks, Olivia. I enjoyed reading this. The image of the viper being ridden and the line about pity that follows it a few paragraphs later, it reminded me of a line from Macbeth of all things: "And pity, like a naked newborn babe, / Striding the blast." Good stuff.
Thanks, Olivia. I enjoyed reading this. The image of the viper being ridden and the line about pity that follows it a few paragraphs later, it reminded me of a line from Macbeth of all things: "And pity, like a naked newborn babe, / Striding the blast." Good stuff.
this was amazing. couldn't stop reading.
Reading this made me annoyed on behalf of the protag. Super condescending character, well-written
I loved the tone. Very catcher rye esque
water finally got through the stone ⏳️
Great story. Sparse, controlled, vivid, unsuspectingly melancholy.