Nice use of language, and this sort of reads like a fable with the narrative voice. I was anticipating more conflict/complication between the two principal characters as well as character change/growth. The plot spans some thirty years, so what have the characters learned in that time?
I liked your story!
Me too...it read fast... I'm wondering if there is a punch line... a finish...
I liked this story! It made me wonder if small countries really do keep tabs on their especially talented youth like in this story.
Nice use of language, and this sort of reads like a fable with the narrative voice. I was anticipating more conflict/complication between the two principal characters as well as character change/growth. The plot spans some thirty years, so what have the characters learned in that time?