A Novel Excerpt
“‘…assuming you’d like to be processed…’” Or consumed. I like how the power play creeps up slowly, subliminally, and almost unseen, until it’s suddenly the only thing you can see.
Do I detect a note of J.F. Powers in here? Really dug this.
Riveting scene. Very well done.
Can't wait to read the whole thing.
Nice. I'm right there, which is what it's about.
“‘…assuming you’d like to be processed…’” Or consumed. I like how the power play creeps up slowly, subliminally, and almost unseen, until it’s suddenly the only thing you can see.
Do I detect a note of J.F. Powers in here? Really dug this.
Riveting scene. Very well done.
Can't wait to read the whole thing.
Nice. I'm right there, which is what it's about.