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Jared Mazzaschi's avatar

Loved this. Nearly deleted the email, but got started and couldn't stop till I'd finished. Fun story.

Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Absolutely loved this voice.

Doug Hesney's avatar

Best short fiction I’ve read in some time. Thanks for this!

KTyler's avatar

Absolutely adored this--I'm normally guilty of deleting, but the first few lines had me hooked. A modern day Pnin!

Mordecai Martin's avatar

Adored this. The voice!

Tim Wright's avatar

I like how this reveals a troubled and declining protagonist.

Jacob Margolies's avatar

I really liked this. Thanks.

Dan's avatar

Wonderful!